I fear


I’m using far too much dialogue to pad out my story at the moment and not using enough detailed prose to tell the story instead. In 6 pages so far I would I have about close to 4 pages of script and only 2 of detail. Is that normal for it to be disproportionate or do I need to get more imaginative? 

About duncanainsworth

Duncan, 29, will most likely talk about mental health, video games, sci-fi, personal challenges and a few other things. I have Asperger's Syndrome and Depression
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